I often read blogs where writers are told to avoid overused expressions like the plague. That would mean that all idiomatic and figurative language is off the table. The arguments are that triteness weakens prose and that readers gloss over anything overused.
In my humble opinion, there are ways to update clichés so that they have an impactful resonance, and more often than not, end up having a humorous effect.
To prove my point, here are a few recognizable examples of successful, reworked clichés:
-Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels (freshened from the original idiom Lock, Stock and Barrel, meaning everything or every part of the weapon.)
-Orange is the New Black (freshened from two common sayings: the new black and something is the new something.)
-My Sister’s Keeper (freshened from the biblical passage Am I my brother’s keeper?)
Some examples or reworked clichés from my writing:
Cliché: kick to the curb
Rewrite: The next day, while looking out from the gabled walk-out porch off their second-story bedroom, Jill had another realization. She was admiring her perfectly manicured lawn at the time, and within five minutes, she’d kicked Fred’s sorry ass to the other side of it.
Cliché: equal parts, most often found in recipes
Rewrite: Jill sidled up to the armrest on her sister’s hand-me-down couch—which she hypothesized was filled with equal parts stuffing and dust mites—and something crackled below her.
Cliché: workhorse AND battle-axe
Rewrite: She assumed that was code for, HR is making me take it easy on you, because under usual circumstances, she was the workhorse to his battle-axe.
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I’d love to hear your thoughts in the comments. Do you agree or disagree with my logic? Can you refresh one of these these tired expressions? Deer in headlights, needle in a haystack, steal someone’s thunder, bite the dust, better late than never, recipe for disaster, death by a thousand cuts, built like a tank, fall on your sword…or any other cliché?